October 18, 2011
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Remembering the Moon Wrong
What if you remember the moon wrong
And toast to it before it’s full.
Does it mean the same?
Is it as real or of value?
Proclaiming the nearly full moon.
Reaching out to the hope of the moon.
But you must first know it.
Is what you give as real?
What is it that’s given back?
Is it no more real than
the full moon a day early?
Is it no more than an early moon
With your hopes and promises as full?E
Comments (6)
The last two lines def clinched it! Yes, with all your hopes and promises, so very nearly full. I loved that, E!
@sweet_sinceritee - Thank you t! I like this one very much too.
So many question marks… sometimes life makes no sense, sometimes life full of unanswered questions.
@RestlessButterfly - So many questions, so little time. Heh heh!
Nice one! The moon is a harsh mistress… (sorry, I’m letting my inner geek roam free.) I am fascinated by the moon…
@murisopsis - Hi Val! Thanks for coming! I’m fascinated by the Moon too. When people are separated by hundreds of miles, the Moon is the one thing they can look up at and see the same thing. It is something to make people feel closer.