August 16, 2013

  • Appointments

    The town has a well groomed courthouse square
    surrounded by uneven red brick streets.
    Like most towns, 24 times a day,
    the clock’s bell strikes the hour and old men check their watches,
    As if they have places to go and appointments to keep.
    But they sit on the green donated park benches
    that have names engraved in brass.
    Some whittle, some stuff their tobacco pipes
    and some spit into throwaway cups.
    And everyone knows the name of the town dog
    that runs free, unchained but friendly,
    Searching with wildly wagging tail,
    sniffing at pant legs, pockets and shopping bags,
    Everyone knows that in this town
    only the police chief’s dogs are allowed to run free.
    While the old men sit and whittle,
    smoke their pipes and spit in throwaway cups.
    And nervously check on appointments
    that have never been made and they will never keep.

    E.

     

Comments (6)

  • This brought so many things to my mind…a simpler time…a simpler place…but, it brought tears to my eyes…thinking about how quickly time flies…and it seems we just turn around and we will become those older versions of ourselves.I often give rides to seniors who have doctor appointments…one of them said to me, “I have so many doctor appointments, I get nothing else done.” HUGS!!!

  • That sounds like the order of things. (Nice poem.)

  • Nice one! I love the last lines – perfect!

  • Very nice . I have known town squares like this. Wonderful poem. peace always

  • Thank you all for the rec’s! @adamswomanback - becoming older versions of ourselves is inevitable, if we are lucky.@sleekpunk - It seemed to be the order of things many years ago. now it is less common to see gatherings on the town square.@murisopsis - That incessant town clock, hourly reminding everyone of the passing of time,@peacenow - My town square was certainly like this when I was growing up there.

  • @Iamsurrounded - The dog part reminded me of the movie, Hachi: A Dog’s Tale (only it wasn’t a police chief’s dog).

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