July 16, 2012

  • Life

    Riding on fires and flares of exploding stardirt
    Melting into the ice of comets
    orbiting through dark and deep.
    brewed in sunheat,
    Organized by chaos
    Tempered by flame and cold
    Lightly touched by an amino…. I wiggle.

    DSS


    Wolves

    Oh Moon shine on
    Still the night, shine on
    They, on wild haunches
    They, the wild watch
    Shine on – the Moon.

    They think, they watch,
    They wonder.
    Oh Moon shine on,
    They howl.

    DSS

     

Comments (5)

  • Oh, my, but do I like these two (yes I do) The second especially. There are Barred Owls in the woods around the house where I work on the weekends. They were hooting back and forth to each other the other night. Such a delightfully melancholy sound at twilight – or midnight, for that matter, echoing off and around the mountains…Shine on!

  • @SandraErickson - Thanks Sandra! I like that one too. I’ve always wondered what was going on in their heads to make the wolves and coyotes howl at the moon like that. Hell, I feel like howling when the moon is so bright.

     Shine on!

  • Excellent! I like them both – the first made me smile and the second is just wonderful with the repetition. OooowWooOoo!

  • Wow – beautifully worded

  • @murisopsis - I thought perhaps the repetition would make them seem more fidgety.

    @venice - Thank you for the rec V! so glad you enjoyed it.

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